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Philosopher's Stone Shooting Script AND Deathly Hallows Part 2 Draft Script!!!

KranenKranen Posts: 4,768 ✭✭✭✭✭
I've just been sent both of them so I decided to share.

Philosopher's Stone Shooting Script:
http://www.mediafire.com/?rqynxr9hrj3q9s9


DH2 Draft Script:
http://www.mediafire.com/?iw7sem4gnn0umhr

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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Thank you!
  • Samch92Samch92 Posts: 6,398 mod
    Where is the user who always wanted the script? here is chance :P
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  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Any Harry Potter read is a good read. :)

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  • chesterchester Posts: 4,331 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Many differences between the script and the movie itself?
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  • JordyJordy Posts: 613 ✭✭✭✭
    Yup
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  • PumpkinjuicePumpkinjuice Posts: 2,317 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2013
    Voldemort's speech is pretty badass. It's a pity it was shortened down that much. The "why do you live" scene sounded pretty exciting too.
  • JasonJason Posts: 7,279 ✭✭✭✭✭
    BELLATRIX
    Be thankful we only took one.
    Besides...
    (indicating George)
    It’s not like you don’t have a
    spare.
    That bitch..
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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    This confirms that they changed Bellatrix and Voldemort's deaths in order of getting nice 3D shots.
  • WeasleytheKingWeasleytheKing Posts: 371 ✭✭✭
    YES PART 2 BSKAKSBJSKSNNANKAKA
  • WeasleytheKingWeasleytheKing Posts: 371 ✭✭✭
    There's a lot of scenes that just say OMITTED in the battle :( sometimes two or three bits at once :(
  • WeasleytheKingWeasleytheKing Posts: 371 ✭✭✭
    edited August 2013
    The Entrance Hall EXPLODES with COUNTER-FIRE as members
    of the Order, students and staff return fire. Voldemort
    FLICKS his WAND, the AIR PRICKLING with DISTURBANCE as he
    SUMMONS a SHIELD of AIR insulating himself from attack.
    As he sweeps forward, he responds with a DEVASTATING
    SERIES of SPELLS and the Entrance Hall QUAKES. Harry
    turns and dashes...

    This sounds so badass!

    Actually the whole battle at the end has so much more :( Especially between Harry and Voldemort, wow!
  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
    Reading it now and noticing some of this stuff at Shell Cottage was filmed.

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    BELLATRIX (HERMIONE)
    Oh dear, I missed a spot, didn’t
    I? Hold still...

    Hermione poises her wand tip over the bit of ginger
    pushing through the brown of Ron’s hair.

    RON
    Couldn’t do anything about that
    bit in the back that’s always
    flipping up, could you? Dead
    annoying --

    Hermione casts Bellatrix’s malevolent gaze upon him.

    RON
    Never mind. I’m good.
    (peering warily at
    her)
    That is you in there, isn’t it?
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    200A INT. GRINGOTTS - BANKING HALL - DAY 200A
    Dust still hangs in the air. Those Goblins that survived
    straggle over the rubble -- and the occasional dead
    colleague -- toward the exits. Among them, a familiar
    figure emerges...
    Griphook.

    Clutching the sword of Gryffindor, he bumps past his
    dazed brethren, taking an agitated glance over his
    shoulder as he hurries on before turning back round...
    ... and coming to a dead halt before a Death Eater, who
    raises his wand and points it directly between Griphook’s
    eyes.


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  • TheDoctorTheDoctor Posts: 3,940 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2013
    Malfoy Manor just as weak on script. At least the torture was elevated.

    HARRY
    Give the Dark Lord our regards.

    Meh, dumb line.
  • TheDoctorTheDoctor Posts: 3,940 ✭✭✭✭✭
    lol, the snatchers originally bounced off the shield
  • TheDoctorTheDoctor Posts: 3,940 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2013
    Yeah, Voldemort's speech is much better in this. That moment with Ron is also great.
  • TheDoctorTheDoctor Posts: 3,940 ✭✭✭✭✭
    it's cool how the why do you live scene parallels the first movie
  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
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    250 INT. CHAMBER OF SECRETS - CONTINUOUS ACTION - NIGHT 250

    Ron and Hermione spill into the soaring cavern and begin
    to walk the gauntlet of serpents. Hermione peers ahead
    into Salazar Slytherin’s sinister face.

    HERMIONE
    I didn’t expect it to be like
    this.

    RON
    What did you expect it to be like?

    HERMIONE
    Not this.
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    edited August 2013
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    281 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE ROOM OF REQUIREMENT - NIGHT 281

    Draco stops, turns to face the wall and CLOSES HIS EYES.
    As the window behind EXPLODES, filling the corridor with
    SMOKE, Goyle and Blaise jump, but Draco never flinches.

    DRACO
    Take my hand.
    (as they hesitate)
    Now.
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    282 INT. CORRIDOR TO CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS ACTION - NIGHT 282

    Ron and Hermione creep carefully to the end of their
    corridor, peer slowly round the corner.

    THEIR POV - AN EMPTY CORRIDOR
    swirling with smoke.
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  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
    If, at
    the end of that time, you have not
    given yourself up, then I shall
    punish every last man, woman and
    child who tries to conceal you
    from me.

    The joist trembles one last time, then the ambient sounds
    of the night return. The clouds separate, become just
    clouds. Ron YELLS:

    RON
    Never! Do you hear me! NEVER!

    (Ron's line was in the B Roll Footage)
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  • seamusseamus Posts: 1,126 ✭✭✭
    Thank you so much for these! Finally something got my attention here again :)
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  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
    329 INT. ENTRANCE HALL - NIGHT (MOMENTS LATER) 329

    As Harry descends, Neville and Oliver Wood appear in the
    Entrance Hall far below, carrying the body of a smallish
    boy: Nigel.

    OLIVER WOOD
    I’ll take him from here.

    Oliver throws Nigel over his shoulder, enters the Great
    Hall. Neville watches them go, looking, for a moment,
    very old. Then, wearily, he turns, heading back outside.

    :(( :(( :((

    EXT. HOGWARTS - GROUNDS - NIGHT (MOMENTS LATER) 330

    In the distance, SHADOWS collect the dead, too occupied
    with their grim task to notice Harry. He stares straight
    ahead, just walking, until a VOICE tugs his ear:

    GINNY
    It’s all right. We’re going to
    get you inside.

    Ginny crouches over the tiny Ravenclaw girl, who is
    CRYING.

    YOUNG GIRL
    I kept calling. No one came.

    GINNY
    Don’t worry. I won’t leave you.
    I promise.

    Ginny strokes the sobbing girl’s hair, her own face
    haunted by sorrow. Harry studies her, moved, then
    continues on. A moment later, Ginny turns, looks to the
    place where he was standing... but finds only darkness.

    :(( :(( :(( :(( :(( :(( :((
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    As the fragment hits its mark, Nagini strikes blindly,
    furious, then spies Hermione. Instantly she begins to
    slither toward her.

    As Hermione stands her ground, we DOLLY LEFT and REVEAL
    Ron, clutching a BASILISK FANG in his FIST.
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    Voldemort wheels wildly in Harry’s direction when:

    DRACO
    Potter!

    Harry turns. Draco’s hand whips forward and -- to
    Harry’s shock -- tosses him his wand. Ron GRINS.
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  • JordyJordy Posts: 613 ✭✭✭✭
    @ryguy Peeves is in the ps script.
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  • chesterchester Posts: 4,331 ✭✭✭✭✭
    @Jordy: don't tease us! Post it! :P
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  • seamusseamus Posts: 1,126 ✭✭✭
    ...and Sorting Hat singing and Hogwarts anthem (we saw that picture earlier)...
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  • KranenKranen Posts: 4,768 ✭✭✭✭✭
    chester said:

    @Jordy: don't tease us! Post it! :P

    I still haven't properly read it (I'm moving houses so I honestly haven't had time), but I did just skim through the whole PS script looking for the word 'Peeves' (seeing as it's a photocopy, I can't just search it). This is the two scenes just I found. There could be others that I missed:

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  • PumpkinjuicePumpkinjuice Posts: 2,317 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2013

    The Entrance Hall EXPLODES with COUNTER-FIRE as members
    of the Order, students and staff return fire. Voldemort
    FLICKS his WAND, the AIR PRICKLING with DISTURBANCE as he
    SUMMONS a SHIELD of AIR insulating himself from attack.
    As he sweeps forward, he responds with a DEVASTATING
    SERIES of SPELLS and the Entrance Hall QUAKES. Harry
    turns and dashes...

    This sounds so badass!

    Actually the whole battle at the end has so much more :( Especially between Harry and Voldemort, wow!

    One of my biggest disappointments about DH 2 was the lack of spectacular magic during the climax. Harry and Voldemort merely used generic spells we've seen a thousand times before, and Priori Incantatem was overused. It had nothing on the duel between Dumbledore and Voldemort. It's understandable in a way because DD and V were the most gifted wizards the world had seen, but the lack of creativity was disappointing nevertheless.
  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    The more I read of this, the more disappointed I am with the final product. To see what DH2 could have been...

    Lord Stafford.
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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    We know that these scenes we're filmed. Looks like in post-production the studio or the producers decided to butcher the film, like if it wasn't enough with the missing scenes on Part 1. This wouldn't have happened if they wouldn't have shot the films back-to-back. By changing the split point, they made a mess with the two movies, cutting like 40, 45 minutes of scenes.
  • PumpkinjuicePumpkinjuice Posts: 2,317 ✭✭✭✭✭

    The more I read of this, the more disappointed I am with the final product. To see what DH2 could have been...

    Lord Stafford.

    Now we know that Kloves cannot be blamed for the faults of the last movie. It's still brilliant in many ways, but Yates is both responsible for what's exceptionally great and what's lacking.

  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    DH2 could have been two and a half hours long and it would have been perfect.

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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    If you take into account how long are the scripts of both parts, it totally matches what Mark Day said about both films being 140 minutes long.
  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    And it looks like some of these changes we're done very late in post-production.



    Almost the whole cue is missing on the movie, because Desplat scored the deleted scene with Harry going to the forest, and watching Oliver carrying Nigel, and Ginny comforting a student.
  • PumpkinjuicePumpkinjuice Posts: 2,317 ✭✭✭✭✭

    And it looks like some of these changes we're done very late in post-production.



    Almost the whole cue is missing on the movie, because Desplat scored the deleted scene with Harry going to the forest, and watching Oliver carrying Nigel, and Ginny comforting a student.

    I can't believe they cut that. It would have been a strong reminder of what Harry is fighting for, who he is dying for.
  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2013
    And what's worst is that Desplat used the emotional B phrase of the Obliviate theme (the one which is used in At The Burrow, Ron Leaves, and Farewell To Dobby), which it would have made the scene even better.
  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    The worst thing about this is that we'll probably never see the cut footage. I just hope that when Harry Potter is eventually rebooted we'll see something more akin to a worthwhile original script.

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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2013
    Also, if you notice Harry and Voldemort's final battle in the script was divided. They made it look like it they fight, Neville kills Nagini, they stop, the fight continues, and Voldemort dies.
  • PumpkinjuicePumpkinjuice Posts: 2,317 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Really there is a lot of wasted potential here. They butchered Kloves' beautifully written King's Cross scene and Voldemort's speech (which made Kloves' following dialogue seem out of place). Kloves handed Yates some pretty darn fantastic and spectacular fighting material between Voldemort and Harry which was thrown out the window.
  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I feel sorry for Kloves; he did a great job.

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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭

    Really there is a lot of wasted potential here. They butchered Kloves' beautifully written King's Cross scene and Voldemort's speech (which made Kloves' following dialogue seem out of place). Kloves handed Yates some pretty darn fantastic and spectacular fighting material between Voldemort and Harry which was thrown out the window.

    Or at least it wasn't shown in the film. But really, if they would have made both parts separated, the result it would have been better. Given what the script of both parts showed, the films had a better flow.
  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
    Read the entire script, Im totally pissed at everyone at WB, that includes Heyman and Yates. We finally know where the Elder Wand scene goes and that Voldy's speech could have been better.
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  • yonythemoonyyonythemoony Posts: 5,638 ✭✭✭✭✭

    I feel sorry for Kloves; he did a great job.

    Lord Stafford.

    He did a better job with the part 2 script than the first one. Still that one had all these typical stuff from him, like making Hermione to look like a superhero.
  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
    Someone of the lines that Ron said in the movie Hermione was suppose to say.
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  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I'm not sure who to blame. WB? Heyman? Yates? I'm massively disappointed.

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  • RichardRichard Posts: 48,700 mod
    Thats why I wont read this, im not in the mood to be pissed lol.
  • IsaiahIsaiah Posts: 3,342 mod
    Blame em all James. Cause I am. This is just so upsetting knowing that Part 2 could have been way better with sub character development.
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  • Lord StaffordLord Stafford Posts: 27,352 ✭✭✭✭✭
    DH2 could have been a lot better in regards to character development, but it clearly suffered from having arrogant, wasteful people at the helm. Essential elements were either condensed or dropped completely, while important deaths were cliched with pointless 3D shots. The opportunity to give Harry Potter the righteous sendoff that it deserved was shown to be less important than having more showings, meaning more money. I remember taking one look at the length of the final film thinking someone has had a go at this, and as it turns out, someone well and truly had.

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